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Friday, May 12, 2006

Ruang Bercahaya

I'm not really into sajak but this is one of those I tried out.
Do give your comments, and if possible identify yourselves too, so I could say thanks. :)

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Satu fenomena yang kusangka pupus
Mengejutkan aku dari lamunan
Yang tiada hentinya sejak dahulu lagi

Ini kerna tiba-tiba
Kelihatan seumpama satu sinar cahaya
Di hujung ruang
Menyinari kekelaman ruang ini

Cahayanya
Menyinari ruang ini
Agak terang sedikit walaupun masih samar

Kucuba hampiri punca cahaya itu
Ku lihat
Ku tatapi
Ku tanya diri ini

Kelihatannya seperti sebutir bintang
Yang berguguran
Jatuh terletak
Ke hujung ruang yang kudiami ini

Selangkah ku bergerak
Bergerak menuju sinaran cahaya itu
Ku tanya sekali lagi

Apakah cahaya itu
Bakal menghiasi ruang ini?


Hazriq
4 Jan 06

9 Comments:

  • At 2:24 PM, Blogger JMN said…

    Wah! Nice! ever thought of putting it in Berita Harian? Cheers.

     
  • At 12:12 PM, Blogger kampunguy said…

    Thanks, jmn da vinci.

    At the moment, nolah.

     
  • At 11:15 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    Nice..begitu mendalam sajak itu..
    Karangan khas utk siaper? hihi..
    Anyway, bila short story nak masuk?

     
  • At 2:21 AM, Blogger kampunguy said…

    Hi anonymous..

    thanks...karangan khas untuk saper? Rasa2 untk saper..?? hehehe

    ni one of those few times trying to write sajak..masih banyak nak belajar....

    so awaiting the cerpen eh..? Insya-Allah...ia pasti disambung.... :)

     
  • At 1:13 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    Hey Hazriq, nice sajak. Simple yet beautiful. U write a lot. ;)

    -Sabrina

     
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  • At 1:22 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    Hey awak,

    It is a good way to start. Anyway, bak pepatah Melayu; merangkak dahulu sebelum berjalan.

    Based on personal experience, though I only write sajak when I was in school, I always feel that to write something you must have passion. With passion, you are able to write anything and it will turn out to be great.

    Keep it up.

    KC

     
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